Here are the latest poems for my 26 poem challenge to cover 26 different species found at Navasola in Southern Spain. These particular wild flowers are now fading as their time for flowering is over and a new wave of wild spring flowers have arrived. In nature so much seems transient but all the flowers have been waiting and preparing for their moments of glory all through the year or longer. They have been in long preparation to ensure their species survive.
And so I have a rather religious or spiritual link for them all. Some inspiration comes from the candle like shapes as in Jewish tradition and symbols for the creation story and the very special day of rest. The common names of some of the flowers provide links to God and the bible too. All these flowers are such incredibly evolved species in their own right and show the wonder of nature or God’s creation.
Comments on the ‘form’ of poetry I am trying to create are at the end.
4. Tassel Hyacinth
You capture light with blue
Radiating calm, candles curved
Upward to a lost God
We searched for in dark places
You found in your seed’s desire.
5. Star of Bethlehem
Each pointed point prepares
The Way from birth to Heaven
White beauty shines bright
A flower’s time is but a breath
Of hope above our Earth.
6. Solomon’s Seal
Did all on earth agree
To learn the ways of the wise
Praise the life of Spring
With heads hung low
Close to the living earth?
7. The Wild Peony
I wrote about you once
Your wild genes, your pink beauty,
Ready to receive
So many into your pollen filled heart
There is nectar for all.
8. The Palmate Anenome
Once I drew your curves
To find my hesitant lines
Gave me silent joy.
Your flower held high
By stronger forces than I could ever know.
The form of these poems is a mix of haiku extended into my own 26 word form. I begin with the pattern of haiku of 17 syllables or words and then put in the extra to make up 26 words. Although short it still takes time for the poem to evolve and to be a tribute to each flower as well as any other meaning.
I have been thinking about different approaches to writing poetry and in particular as to what makes a poem and what also makes a good poem, and when is a poem finished. I wished to go back and change some words on the last poem haiku at the end, I wanted the more evocative kiss rather than love .
How do poems make us feel something differently, a new perspective perhaps is important, a new way of looking at our world, and for me ‘The sound must echo the sense’ from TS Eliot. I like a lyrical feel but think I must try a different approach soon and some humour! Well, TS Eliot ranged from The Four Quartets to Cats.
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I like the format a lot Georgina. It is brief and succinct yet has room enough to develop. Nicely done.
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Thanks, yes, well that’s because I have tried to find a way to do a shorter poem of 26 words rather than lines! A mix I think of haiku and almost Tanka but need to look at the other Japanese forms a bit more.
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Lovely flowers and poem, Georgina. I have a mystery flower on my blog post today. I searched for its name but so far no luck. I wonder if you can help. Hope you’re staying safe and well.
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Thanks Natalie, I will have a look.
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Beautifully done!
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Thank you, it took its own time!
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I like all of these – you seem to have found a form that suits your voice. And I don’t know the tassel hyacinth at all – how lovely.
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Thanks, yes, it is a wild native here and there were so many from March onwards.
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so beautiful
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Thanks, and now all gone as the heat rises!
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Are you in the 30s now?
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Just but enough being 29/30 up here in May and for next week. I am ‘locked in’ now because of pollen and heat! Flowers fading fast too.
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Oh no! Hope pollen passes through quickly. Guessing trees are the worst where you are
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Yes, can finally see all the tiny olive pollen. Keep well.
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Roll on the fruit!
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I love the first one…
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Thanks, yes it was the first inspiration!
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Wow just Wow! A mixture of Haiku Tanka and what – Free Verse. Beautiful and highly original.
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Thanks, just trying for 26 words really but made me think how to add to a haiku and looked up about other forms! A bit of fun with form!
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Lovely poems and I like them as a collection with the spiritual imagery running through it.
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Thanks, Andrea, I hope to do more in that style and really enjoyed the focus on each flower.
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